The end of a cultured Canada didn't come
Canadians did not awake to reefers from dry lips
Convenience store owners have not grown rich
Zombies and their likes have not increased in sum
Some thought we'd all be done
So, my friend, smoke another one....
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2023
Simon St. Laurent
2 comments:
Hey Simon, how are you. You worke for my Dad on Fraser a while back.
The peom is pretty good to be honest. But I have my opinion.
It has the structure for something great but right now it's too short.
I worked for your father? Cool.
It's a flash poem, but thanks for your opinion. Always appreciated! I've not smoked in years. Perhaps I need to indulge again; expand my mind... and poem....
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